Poemasabi Jr is poetry blog by first and second graders in Fairfield County Connecticut. Students write under pen names and comments are moderated but welcome.
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It looks like a balloon with many strings
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It looks like sticks attached to a rock
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It looks like scribbly lines and sea sand
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It looks like parts of a chair and a circle
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Brilliant, One of the cool things about reading other poet's work is that you get to see things differently. Your line "It looks like a balloon with many strings" had me immediately.
Brilliant,
ReplyDeleteOne of the cool things about reading other poet's work is that you get to see things differently. Your line "It looks like a balloon with many strings" had me immediately.